A Gift Given and Offered | Filed under General
The wind whisperers softly against my silky hair
The green in my eyes, sparkled with tears
The breezes made soft music, the sun shined so bright
We can’t stop time, but we still had some light
I stood with you in the sun not in the moonlight
My arms wrapped around you not loosely but so tight
I wanted so much to not let you go till the morning
When the sun peaks and dawn brings its first glow of light
I left you with soft dreams of passion
Their warmth did encompass your soul
Tender offerings to stave off the darkness
Until I can hold you once more
Victoria Smith
December 8, 2004
December 8th, 2004 at 10:20 pm
Very nice. You ever thought of collecting these and putting them in a book?
December 8th, 2004 at 10:56 pm
That was so beautiful!!!! You write so well!
*HUGS* and thanks for all your hugs and support!! You’re so wonderful!
December 9th, 2004 at 10:01 am
How beautiful!!!
December 9th, 2004 at 11:35 pm
Beautiful !! You write so well !!
December 10th, 2004 at 2:37 am
Now there’s a heartfelt post. XLNT work.
December 10th, 2004 at 4:01 pm
How beautiful
December 10th, 2004 at 9:41 pm
thats beautiful….I love it!